My writing goal

My writing goal
My writing goal is to add adjectives and verbs into my writing. Also to remember capital letters after full stops.
I enjoyed writing. I have been learning how to move up to the next level.	Rico
I am level 2b in writing and I need to be at level 2p by the end of the year.

Art Clay Pot

We made cay cups for a project. The whole class had ideas to hold water in it.

Here is a picture of me making my cup.

 

Visual Pepeha.

Here is my art work. It is a self portrait of me with mountains and koru's in the background.

Narrative Writing

We have been learning how to write narratives. Here is a narrative I have written about a girl with a plane

The Fence Fire

One day not that long ago Deevon walked into the lush green paddock to fly a plane into the sun rise and around the tree by her favourite rock. She threw the plane into the sky. It did a loop the loop around the tree and crashed into the fence. The batteries leaked and were burning the fence. Suddenly a fire started. Deevon yelled for help. HELP! HELP!

Kaynee rushed out from his house with a bucket of water to put it out. He was slow moving through the big grassy meadow. Finally he got to the fire and poured the water on but it quickly ran out. The fire was spreading around the oak tree. The table and chair caught alight. She screamed, “call the fire brigade.”   

Finally the fire truck arrived. The tree was burning. Luckily the fire men put the fire out as quick as they could.  The fire was out. The fire left black marks everywhere. The beautiful green paddock was no longer.

That night she went to bed and thought about the poor old oak tree.

Handwriting

This is my handwriting sample for Term 2. My next goal is make sure I close my letters up. 

                                                          I can type 12 words per minute

Sea/Moana Animals

killer whale-tohora

shark-mango 

crab-papaka

dolphin-aihe

octopus-wheke

stingray-whai repo

fish-ika

I have been learning about the Maori words for the animals that live in the sea.
I have liked the games he made with these words.

swimming