Narrative Writing

We have been learning how to write narratives. Here is a narrative I have written about a girl with a plane

The Fence Fire

One day not that long ago Deevon walked into the lush green paddock to fly a plane into the sun rise and around the tree by her favourite rock. She threw the plane into the sky. It did a loop the loop around the tree and crashed into the fence. The batteries leaked and were burning the fence. Suddenly a fire started. Deevon yelled for help. HELP! HELP!

Kaynee rushed out from his house with a bucket of water to put it out. He was slow moving through the big grassy meadow. Finally he got to the fire and poured the water on but it quickly ran out. The fire was spreading around the oak tree. The table and chair caught alight. She screamed, “call the fire brigade.”   

Finally the fire truck arrived. The tree was burning. Luckily the fire men put the fire out as quick as they could.  The fire was out. The fire left black marks everywhere. The beautiful green paddock was no longer.

That night she went to bed and thought about the poor old oak tree.